Headline: 'Invasion of the Parakeets'

This is just a layout page for my headline, I'm looking in to the use of hand drawn type within this brief as its a process I've not used before.
I'm wanting to keep the imagery of the birds quite simple so that it can just sit nicely within the background to let the type lead.
However I feel the type isn't really working within this design and I'm considering going back to using ready made fonts instead of my own. But I will keep experimenting with hand drawn type throughout this brief and hopefully find a type face that works.